Skipping Painted Stones
An entertaining art blog based in rural Iowa and written by author and artist Haley McAndrews.
I'll start this post off with a shout-out to my high school speech teacher, Mr. Brennan. I've written hundreds of press releases over the years (one of them even got me a job running an art gallery,) and will surely be in thousands by the time I die. And every single one I write has the same structure I learned in speech class. Why speech? Because every news article is basically an informational speech, minus the sweating palms and audience staring at you. There are three basic parts to a press release: an introduction, the body, and a conclusion. Just like breakfast is the most important meal of the day, the introduction is the most important part of the article. It needs to answer the who, what, when, and where. The body is the why, and the conclusion restates the information from the introduction with the addition of how to find out even more. Sounds simple enough, right? The very first sentence in your press release is vital to get right. This is not where you include your hook though - the article title is going to be the hook to grab the reader's interest. The first sentence needs to be to the point and include your who, what, where, and when. This is because there are many people who just glance through articles. If they are only going to read one sentence, you need to get the message across. So for example, if my title is "Local Author Earns 5-Star Review" (there's the general idea and hook,) my first sentence will be "Local author/illustrator Haley McAndrews of Denison, IA, recently earned a 5-Star review from ReadersFavorite.com for her third book, Toaster Haiku." To break it down: Who: Haley McAndrews, a local author/illustrator Where: Denison, IA What: 5-Star book review from ReadersFavorite.com When: recently The when would also come into play if this was about an event like an opening reception or a gallery show, you could add the dates and time in. Or maybe it's about an award you won last week. Then you would add that information in. Your introduction can be one sentence long. It's allowed. If you have more information needed in the introduction, you can add it but keep it direct. If you want to add details, make it a paragraph in the body of the article. Before we get too deep into the body, here are a few essential rules on writing professionally:
Alright, onto the body! Here's where your article gets interesting, and you get to give all your details; the big "why." What do you include in the body?
And finally we arrive at the conclusion. Ideally it is one paragraph and it's a twin to your introduction. Not an identical twin (don't just copy and paste) but more like a fraternal twin, definitely. You need to restate the first sentence of your intro, but reword it. Restate your who, what, where, and when. Also mention how people can find out more: a phone or address for the gallery, a website, or an email address. This is also where you can give your professional social media handles. If you have art at local galleries or will be selling at a local event, mention that too. Ok, Haley, I have a fantastic and very professional news release written... Now what? Now you submit it! I recommend getting the email address of as many local papers as possible. You'll want to send it to a community/arts reporter (if the paper has one) or an editor. Make absolutely sure that you are sending it blind carbon copy (BCC:) if you are sending one email to many different papers. This way you won't offend anyone accidentally. More on your email; make sure you include the following information before the article: your name, studio name, mailing address, phone number, and email. This way, if they have questions they have all your contact info. You'll also want to find out when the deadline for submissions is prior to printing, so you can send your release in a timely manner. Don't forget to attach a photo or other image to the email to be included with the article. Remember the saying - a picture is worth a thousand words! Writing a great press release is a skill that gets honed with practice, just like everything else is. If you use these tips when writing, you can take your articles to the next level. Keep in mind that submitting a press release should be free. Be wary of a reporter or paper that wants to charge you for submitting a release. And, they may choose in the end not to run your article, or to rewrite some of it. Try not to take it personally, they could be saving it for a later date, or maybe they ran out of room. Either way, take a deep breath and try again next time, because I believe in you! 😊
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